Friday, 13 May 2016


WALHT: Write an interesting and enjoyable narrative

On a terrible stormy  day the the sun was behind the dark cloud,the sky was dark grey and the streets were empty and really windy .Izac was a famous scientist who worked with chemicals in his lab. He loved to mix the chemicals.Izac had a son named Ihaka and they loved to walk in the park.Ihaka was a really good kid but that day he was really angry because of the weather.Izac said that it was not a great day to go for a walk anymore.

When Izac said ,”no we can not go to the park it's not good weather” Ihaka decided to make a park of his own.He gathered all the thing he could find that would be useful.Soon his  park was ready.He told his dad to come and look at his park , Izac was impressed.Ihaka asked his dad  if they could for a walk one more time but Izac said, “NO”. Ihaka got even more angry that he waited until his dad left the Lab. Once his dad ran inside to get a glass of water Ihaka ran to get the chemical but Izac got back just in time to stop him from pouring the chemical on himself.

Izac got upset with him so he hammered the table and then the chemical splashed onto Ihaka.Then Ihaka started getting bigger and bigger.Izac told Ihaka to run out of the lab.Once Ihaka got out of the lab Izac started straight away to make another chemical to try and change Ihaka back to normal.While Izac was making the chemical Ihaka was walking around the town asking people if they have a drink but the drinks that they had were to small.When Ihaka was walking around Izac was busy trying to make the chemical but it took at least a couple of days to make the chemical.

Once it was finished Izac tried to ring Ihaka but he didn’t answer.Izac went looking for Ihaka but it took him at least a couple of hours to find him.Ihaka he said ,” I made the chemical that can change you back but you need to splash it on yourself before midnight”.Ihaka spilt it on himself straight away.When they were waiting for the chemical to wear off.They went to get some food to eat and while they were eating he was getting smaller and smaller until he was just the right size.

In conclusion I think that Ihaka and Izac had a fun time even though Ihaka was a giant for a couple of days.After Ihaka was back to normal they Had the best time even Izac but I think that Ihaka was splendid to be back to normal.

1 comment:

  1. Hi trinity
    I really liked your story although there were a bit of mistakes in there , I still thought you did a great job. I hope next time you will write a more interesting story . Don't you think?